New king's hill nightmare: Bad breakup

Coach Anderson: fuuuuck she's tight!!
Henry: How the fuck did you get her to agree to this?
Hana: I just told her id start uploading these and other stuff I have
Henry: Ha Ha, that's not very nice thing to do
Hana: And?, that'll teach the little slut to break up with me
Fred: Any chance you'd be willing to share those?
Hana: Im sure we can work out a price.
Bob: Yea Anderson and Henry are spitroasting the bitch as we speak
Henry: Id like to get in on that deal as-well
Bob: The motel off route 6... ill ask Henry
Henry: What?
Bob: Can Carl bring a few friends?
Henry: Don't ask me its Hana's show
Hana: Sure, the more the merrier, right Rori.
Bob: He-He, Hana says the more the merrier
Hana: Oh and tell'em to bring some beer and pizza we got the room for the whole night so you guys need to keep your strength up.
Bob: you heard her, we're gonna be pulling an all-nighter
Fred: SHIT! remind me to never piss you off.

Featuring from left to right

Coach Anderson
Hana
Fred
RoriCollins
Bob
HenryCollins

Any constructive critque of the render, characters or text is welcome.
If anybody have any situations they would like to see my OC's in let know, im allways looking for new ideas and inspiration